GETTING STARTED
In his prose introduction to the 1855 edition of "Leaves of Grass," Walt Whitman says:
Faith is the antiseptic of the soul . . . it pervades the common people and preserves them . . . they never give up believing and expecting and trusting. There is that indescribable freshness and unconsciousness about an illiterate person that humbles and mocks the power of the noblest expressive genius.
Take a moment to think about this quotation and what it means.
Next, consider the following lines from "Leaves of Grass":
Do you see any relations between these two pieces of writing? What are they?
I understand the large hearts of heroes,
The courage of present times and all times;
How the skipper saw the crowded and rudderless wreck of the steamship, and death
chasing it up and down the storm,
How he knuckled tight and gave not back one inch, and was faithful of days and
faithful of nights,
And chalked in large letters on a board, Be of good cheer, We will not desert you;
How he saved the drifting company at last,
How the lank loose-gowned women looked when boated from the side of their
prepared graves,
How the silent old-faced infants, and the lifted sick, and the sharp-lipped unshaved
men;
All this I swallow and it tastes good . . . . I like it well, and it becomes mine,
I am the man . . . . I suffered . . . . I was there.
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SMALL GROUPS
Get into small groups (of 2 or 3 people) and discuss your thoughts on the above. Then consider each of the following questions with your group as it relates to the lines above:
- What do these lines and this scenesay about the rest of the poem and about Whitman's overall project with "Leaves of Grass" in 1855? (This is a big question, so don't worry if you can't answer it right away)
- What does "skipper" mean? Look it up in the OED. How might a "skipper" differ from a steamboat captain? Think about the role of technology, what that technology says about class and social standing, and the social "worth" of the people in the scene, and what does it mean for the "skipper" to be heroic? Are there differences between the steamboat and the skipper's boat? What about the skipper and the people he rescues? Why do those differences matter? In your answers consider these pictures of what the steamboat and what the skipper's boat might have looked like. Also consider the picture of the steamboat explosion so you can get a better visual picture of the scope of the disaster the skipper would be facing.
- Think about the role of technology, what that technology says about class and social standing, and the social "worth" of the people in the scene?
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LARGE GROUP
We will reconvene and, and each group will discuss what they talked about. The goal of this section is to make sure each of the groups is "on track" with the assignment in noticing that the "skipper" is an unlikely hero and that his task of saving the entire steamship company is HUGE.
The discussion should be led such that the students understand that Whitman is uniting concepts of high and low. I will steer toward a discussion of class, ability, and literacy.
Questions to consider in this segment:
We will reconvene and, and each group will discuss what they talked about. The goal of this section is to make sure each of the groups is "on track" with the assignment in noticing that the "skipper" is an unlikely hero and that his task of saving the entire steamship company is HUGE.
The discussion should be led such that the students understand that Whitman is uniting concepts of high and low. I will steer toward a discussion of class, ability, and literacy.
Questions to consider in this segment:
- What are the stakes of this scene?
- Where might some of the same ideas reappear?
- Why does it matter that the skipper is a skipper?
- Why does it matter that the skipper WRITES a message to these people?
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WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT
WRITTEN ASSIGNMENT
There are two parts to the written assignment, and each part should be approximately 1 page in length AT LEAST. These are not formal essays. The goal here is for students to articulate their thoughts in a way that is meaningful to them. They should address the questions without considerations of thesis statements or formal essay structure.
- PART ONE: The first task is to simply talk about your impressions from both the small group and large group conversations. Be sure to include SPECIFIC EXAMPLES from the poem, the pictures, and the other things you looked at. Try to answer as many of the questions detailed in the "SMALL GROUP" section as you can.
- PART TWO: The second task is to repeat the process. Find a scene, line, or detail in the poem that exemplifies the idea of bringing together the high and the low. Think about questions of class, size, stature, literacy, and prejudicial expectations that we discussed. It might help to try to picture the things in the poem actually happening and think about what these people might have actually been like in their interactions. Does the way Whitman describes the interaction mesh with how you think things "should" be? Is there anything counter-intuitive about it? Think about the same kinds of questions we answered for the scene with the skipper, but apply them to the scene or detail you choose.
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WHAT'S GOING ON IN THE BACKGROUND?
WHAT'S GOING ON IN THE BACKGROUND?
The main question students are answering is:
The overall goals of the assignment are:
The secondary, background goals of the assignment is:
The proof they "got it" will be:
What kinds of things does Whitman do within the poem to level (or invert) concepts of high and low?
The overall goals of the assignment are:
Students will gain an understanding of Whitman's push to level (or invert, at times) conceptualizations of high and low (in terms of class and social standing) and challenge our ideas of what certain people are capable of accomplishing. Students should be able to relate the implied prejudgments of his readers (i.e. that as a "lesser" man, the skipper is an unlikely hero) to their own prejudgments in their own lives, thereby understanding what Whitman was challenging his readers to do. Students should start to grasp that Whitman's poem does other things to challenge people's concepts of what is "worthy" and "noble" in terms of form as well as content.
The secondary, background goals of the assignment is:
Students should begin to understand that one small piece of a poem or work of literature relates in many different ways to the whole poem, and that the writer's overall strategy manifests itself in multiple ways throughout the poem.
Students should be starting to develop skills in reading passages and relating things they see in those passages to greater works. We're working on observation over analysis, but hopefully some simple analysis would organically flow from this project in future discussions.
The proof they "got it" will be:
The first part of the assignment is designed to give them a grasp on how something like this works. My questions are (hopefully) specific enough to guide them directly to where I want them to get (that is, answering that main question about the high and the low). If it does, then they should be able to recognize the skipper scene as an example of something that. If the assignment is effective, they will be able to produce their own example "skipper scene" in the second part of the question.
Great! THis is a fantastic start! Your structure and evaluation are very clear and suggestive!
ReplyDeleteAbout the first part: since you're interested in Whitman's "heroism" of the ordinary - - I might start by asking the students to write about "heroism" - -e.g. who they would define as an authentic hero and why etc.
Then, I think I'd start tacking toward the big question right away by asking the students to "read" the passage as an example of heroism - -what is heroic? who is heroic? What kinds of skills will the students need to "read" the passage? Can you give them ways of developing these skills: i.e. encourage them to pay attention to language, to narrative, to stance?
This starts to tackle the heroism part, but the "democratic" part is where I think your contextual/object stuff would come in really handy. I.e. where will students go to understand the difference between "skipper" and "captain" in 1855 speak? How will the images help students to "see" the kind of heroism that Whitman envisions? How will the students "read" these images? What kinds of skills and knowledges will they need?
Tackling the big question - - What do these lines and this scenesay about the rest of the poem and about Whitman's overall project with "Leaves of Grass" in 1855? - - will be easier after this work through the idea of "heroism" in this particular scene and context. Once students have developed the kinds of skills and understandings from working with these more circumscribed arenas - - then I think the next logical step is to ask them to find particular, concrete other sections of the poem that deal with "democratic heroism" and compare them to the pieces they've already looked at - - carrying along and applying the ideas/skills they've already developed.
I guess one big question - - not so big maybe - -is where technology fits in here? I.e. is the technological a realm of heroism? or a realm of anti-heroism? Is the steamship a more or less heroic object in the mid-19th century than the Clipper ships? E.g. is Whitman delineating a modernity with plenty of room for heroes - - as opposed to typical "Golden Age" narratives where modernity proscribes heroism and reduces all to banality? I.e. how doe technology, heroism, and democracy fit? or how do you want students to explore their fit?